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Blinding Cold

Coldest morning yet
Frigid wind chills my face, damn
Left eye frozen shut

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  1. January 15, 2009 at 9:29 am

    Nicely done. There are all kinds of resolving lines available for such a scenario:

    Wet hair broke right off

    Or perhaps the pirate poet
    Arrrrgh, ball be frozen

  2. January 15, 2009 at 9:41 am

    Is new, not sure why
    Horrid bone chill creates rhyme
    Bah. Walk: long and cold.

    Eye-lid frozen shut,
    Not as bad or worse? Not sure
    Ice ball in nostril

  3. Theo
    January 15, 2009 at 2:10 pm

    next week i buy a car.

  4. January 15, 2009 at 2:31 pm

    We should always talk like this.

  5. January 15, 2009 at 2:59 pm

    next stop: mexico

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